Like Snakes, Entity is one of the first corruption stories I ever read. I was new to erotic fiction and MCStories was a wonderland of material. Among all of that content, however, one author in particular stood out. This author went by the name of Twisted.
Twisted's stories featured many of the elements that would later influence my own writing: demonic corruption, physical transformation, serial recruitment. Twisted synthesized these concepts brilliantly into short, but impactful stories.
Two in particular linger with me still: Entity and Plague. Today I will be covering Entity. It's the shorter of these two stories, but I also think it is the better one.
The story follows Sue, a pretty blonde teenager full of energy and vigor, as she travels into the woods behind her house with her (soon to be ex) boyfriend. When the pair reach a strange cave, the boyfriend ditches Sue, unable to keep up with her boundless energy. While Sue is momentarily upset, her curiosity gets the better of her and she ventures into cave. Inside, she discovers a strange, intricately marked urn and, of course, her first impulse is to touch the damn thing.
Things then take a turn, as they always do in these kinds of stories, towards the erotic. When Sue touches the urn, she is overcome by a mysterious energy and knocked unconscious. From there, the urn begins to shimmer with a strange light before erupting with a pair of tentacles. The tentacles explore and then enter Sue, bringing about an intense transformation to the girl's mind, body, and soul.
Permanently altered by her experience in the woods, Sue returns home to her overbearing, conservative mother. However, things are different now. With her newfound powers, Sue begins to turn her home life upside down and spread her corruption.
Sue's corruption at the beginning of this story is one of my favorites. It's not the most flashy or intense, but it has subtle qualities that I like. I like the way the tentacles explore her body has she sleeps, eventually finding an entrance and merging themselves with her.
As the story continues, there are aspects I did not find as appealing. The author has a smoking fetish and includes this in his corruptions. I can't really criticize this, because it's a matter of different tastes, but it didn't work for me. However, the story still leads to a thrilling conclusion. Unfortunately, the story was never continued and the author has been inactive for nearly two decades at this point.
Still, if you're out there somewhere Twisted, you're a real one and your stories are fire. If you're a fan of my work, you'll definitely be a fan of this story. Check it out!
As the story continues, there are aspects I did not find as appealing. The author has a smoking fetish and includes this in his corruptions. I can't really criticize this, because it's a matter of different tastes, but it didn't work for me. However, the story still leads to a thrilling conclusion. Unfortunately, the story was never continued and the author has been inactive for nearly two decades at this point.
Still, if you're out there somewhere Twisted, you're a real one and your stories are fire. If you're a fan of my work, you'll definitely be a fan of this story. Check it out!
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